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Jacksonville (Blogging From A to Z Challenge)

April 11, 2015
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This is a tanka.

Pausing on the steps
I purposely don’t look back.
Shame burns with hot fire
and the tears fall as you leave
on a train for Jacksonville.

from → Poetry
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  1. lancequadras permalink
    April 13, 2015 5:08 am

    5 lines and this tanka gave an amazing feel of such emotions.
    Smart use of the letter for the poem.
    Have a nice day.

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    • Michael B. Fishman permalink*
      April 13, 2015 8:32 am

      Thank you, I appreciate the comment and feedback!

      Liked by 1 person

      Reply

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