Friday Fictioneers: In Solitary
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In Solitary
I don’t do much with my days anymore. On the days I go downstairs I spend my time sitting in the kitchen. She’s in every inch of this house; from the wallpaper to the floor rugs, but I feel her presence the strongest in here, right at this table.
I leave the lights off because sometimes, it sounds crazy, but sometimes I hear her moving through the kitchen. I live for those days now. I sit and drink coffee and listen. And while I listen I cry for myself and the years and pray I’ll be with her again soon.
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Very moving and beautiful, really good! x
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A warm and sad story. Full of many emotions I enjoyed.
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How sad. Seems very realistic to me, something that a person faced with unbearable loss might do.
janet
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Very moving vignette of loss. Well done.
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I can relate to this so much right now. This sounds like me.
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condolences!
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This is a beautiful story – I love this bit: “She’s in every inch of this house; from the wallpaper to the floor rugs” and the way he listens for her. One of my favourites this week.
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This is a lovely story, so sad and so believeable. It’s very moving
Dee
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the pain of losing somebody comes out nicely in this story
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Poignant. I see my father in this after my mom passed away.
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A touching story, and it rings true about her presence being felt all around the house.
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Dear Michael,
You’ve said much in a tight space. As others have said, touching and believable. And a wonderful bit of writing to boot.
Happy Passover,
Rochelle
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Hi Michael,
This story is infused with sorrow and you do a great job of letting us feel the character’s loss and mourning. Ron
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really sad story.. i wish i’d never have to go through such an emotion.
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Such a moving love story, Michael. I fear this is not uncommon for people around the world though.
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PS Now I’m going to be distracted by playing with your dog as well as feeding your fish. Curse you!!
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Awww, that’s so sad. I feel for this widower’s tale.
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