Introduction (Abecedarian #1)
November 1, 2009
This is an Abecedarian and at first I didn’t know what to title it, but I decided that a good title is “Introduction”. So, hello! Comments, feedback and suggestions are very welcome!
Always behind,
climbing, dying.
Energy for good
he is journeying, karmic.
Living, milling,
nothing over-pretentious.
Quiet.
Relax.
Shhh…
The understanding
vacillates
with
xeric
yellow
zeal.
© 2009 by Michael Fishman
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Michael B. Fishman
Comment: very cool
Suggestion: try it free verse this time and see where it goes
Title: if a better title doesn’t surface then you could simply call it “Abecedarian 1” – or – “Internal Mountian” although that may be a bit too obtuse and/or pretentious.
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I decided to name it “Introduction” because it’s pretty much me. I joined an online poetry group at Gather and this was the form of the month and it was a fun thinking challenge, but I like the idea of also doing it in free verse.
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