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Introduction (Abecedarian #1)

November 1, 2009

This is an Abecedarian and at first I didn’t know what to title it, but I decided that a good title is “Introduction”. So, hello! Comments, feedback and suggestions are very welcome!

Always behind,
climbing, dying.
Energy for good
he is journeying, karmic.
Living, milling,
nothing over-pretentious.
Quiet.
Relax.
Shhh…
The understanding
vacillates
with
xeric
yellow
zeal.

© 2009 by Michael Fishman

2 Comments leave one →
  1. Amy permalink
    November 3, 2009 9:47 pm

    Comment: very cool
    Suggestion: try it free verse this time and see where it goes
    Title: if a better title doesn’t surface then you could simply call it “Abecedarian 1” – or – “Internal Mountian” although that may be a bit too obtuse and/or pretentious.

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  2. Michael Fishman permalink
    November 5, 2009 10:20 am

    I decided to name it “Introduction” because it’s pretty much me. I joined an online poetry group at Gather and this was the form of the month and it was a fun thinking challenge, but I like the idea of also doing it in free verse.

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